把这个作息时间用英语写成一篇作文 求！

把这个作息时间用英语写成一篇作文 求！ Tom usually gets up at 6:00 every morning.Ten he has breakfast at 7:00.Aftre breakfast he goes to school at 7:20.At about 12:10,he eats lunch.Ang then,in the afternoon(arter school)he plays sports at 15:45.He goes home at 17:00.He has supper at 19:00.After all,he goes to bad at 21:00.
What a nice day!
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Hi !My name is XXX.I get up at 6:00 every day.Then I have breakfast at 7:00.After having breakfast,I go to school at 7:20.I work hard at school.Then I go home.I have lunch at 12:10.At 15:45 I play sports with my friends.Next I go home at 17:00 and have supper at 19:00.Then I do my homework.After doing homework ,I go to bed at 10:00.
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I get up at 6:30.Then I have my breakfast at 7:00.I go to school at 7:20.I have lunch at 12:10.I like sports.I play sports at 3:45.It can make me happy all day.I go home at 5:00.Last,I have supper at 7:00.I love my life very much.