雅思写作“高分神器”大揭密

在雅思备考中，写作不难得分，却难得高分，所以写作成了大部分对分数有要求的烤鸭的“攻克难题”。然而，只是完美的避免了跑题、内容空洞等常见的基础病症，无论怎么努力，仍然很难取得高分。

在雅思备考中，写作不难得分，却难得高分，所以写作成了大部分对分数有要求的烤鸭的“攻克难题”。然而，只是完美的避免了跑题、内容空洞等常见的基础病症，无论怎么努力，仍然很难取得高分。

别怕，现实残酷，“神器”来帮！“高分神器”之一就是：英式思维。而英式思维中，最值得各位烤鸭重视的就是——表达的严谨性，即写作中句子意思表达的严谨性。下面，我们举例分析一下写作句子中大部分烤鸭常见的思维漏洞（学生样文）：

例 1：Watching television everyday has more negative influences than positive ones. Do you agree or disagree ?

Watching TV has an unfavorable influence on the family relationship, by this I mean if one spends the vast majority of his spare time on television, he will lack sufficient time for communication with the family members, which may possibly result in the alienation in the family.

例 2：Should old buildings be destroyed and replaced with modern ones ?

It is widely acknowledged that old buildings are protected today because they actually contribute to economic development. For example, Westminster Abbey in London, the Eiffel Tower in Paris and the Forbidden City in Beijing, as icons and landmarks of the city and nation, attract countless tourists every year, which brings millions of dollars in revenue for the government.

翻译为汉语，两段话的首句分别传递的

意思是：“看电视对家庭关系有负面影响，我的意思是如果一个人花费大量时间看电视会缺乏足够时间与家人进行交流……”

“人们普遍认为老建筑物如今得到保护是因为老建筑实际上可以促进经济发展。例如伦敦的威斯敏斯特教堂、巴黎的埃菲尔铁塔……”