商务英语专业的自我介绍，一分钟左右，希望不要有语法错误， 复制的答案不要

商务英语专业的自我介绍，一分钟左右，希望不要有语法错误， 复制的答案不要 Hello,Everyone：
Let me introduce myself first,my name is **,my major is Business English,I am from **,it is a beasutiful city,and there is a lot of tourist attractions,such as **,people from all over the world visit my city and take photos.Wecome all of you to my town.
As for me,i have a big family,there are 4 people in my family,my parents,my older sister and I,we often have acticities in weekend,such as having a party with our friends and relatives.playing volleyball with our old friends,I am an optimistic and indepent girl,i can deal with some problem by myself,if i am unhappy,i also know how to relieve myself.
In my future,i hope i can get a good job,do business with foreign customers,raise money to travel all my country,all over the world,..............
朋友！尽力了。。。。。话痨不下了。