英语高手看过来！求帮忙修改给港大的自我介绍！！

英语高手看过来！求帮忙修改给港大的自我介绍！！ HKU,one of the best universities in the world, has been appealing to me since I was at a young age.If I have the honor to study in HKU, I will have the opportunity to study with other outstanding students and excellent professors from around the world, which can definitely broaden my horizon and strengthen my skills in my chosen fields. Moreover, HKU provides its students with many opportunities to study abroad and exchange their different views with each other, which becomes one of the reasons for me to choose HKU.
As for major, after serious consideration, Architecture will be my first choice, Pharmacy as the second and Business Administration as the third. Architecture reflects the real history and development of the human kind, and I have always been amazed by the brilliance of the traditional architecture home and abroad. Driven by my curiosity, I am eager to know more about the art of architecture. Also, I have great interests in biology and chemistry, which I believe will contribute greatly to creating a new medicine that cures the patients in suffering in the future. Meanwhile, I am fond of Business Administration because it has a broad appraoch in business and it not only helps a company run more efficiently, but also helps it maximizes its profit. I believe these three majors are most suitable for me.
Concerning about the future, if I am admitted to HKU, I believe I will make more progress and accomplish more achievements in my major.