托福口语名师实例解析一

一、实例：

The speakers discuss two possible solutionsto the woman's problem. Describe the problem and the two solutions. Thenexplain what you think the woman should do and why.

请说出女士问题的两个解决方案，同时描述其遇到的问题。解释你认为女士应该怎么做原因。

二、考生答案：

Mary has cancelled the three days trip. Andshe thought she would have no chance, so she promised Professor Clark to helpthe museum exhibition. And nowadays there is a chance for Mary to enter thetrip. She must choose one place to go, the museum or the trip? I think Maryshould help Professor Clark for the museum exhibition at first. Because shepromised the professor and this is her job now. If she couldn't finish the jobuntil Wednesday, she should give up the trip because she must perform. herpromise.

玛丽已经取消了三天的行程。她以为她就没有机会，所以她答应克拉克教授帮博物馆展览。与时下有玛丽进入行程的机会。她必须选择一个地方去，在博物馆或行程？我认为玛丽应该帮助克拉克教授对博物馆展览在第一。因为她答应了教授，这是她现在的工作。如果她不能完成作业，直到周三，她应该放弃这次旅行，因为她必须执行。她的诺言。

三、解析：

1. 重要信息遗漏，造成题目回答走偏或者可以说是跑题的问题。Listening Materials中很清楚地说明Mary面临两个选择：First, short trip; Second, to help Professor Clark to set up themuseum exhibition.同样她有两个solutions: First, to finish the task before Wednesday; Second, Shefinds someone else to replace her to help Professor Clark to set up the museumexhibition.按照材料中所透露的信息，我想听后大家100%会选择第一个方案，因为它两全其美!这样Mary在既遵守诺言的同时还可以去参加短期旅行，一举两得!而很显然作者遗漏了其中一个solution，所以致使其偏离了主题。

2. 从上面的陈述中我们不难看出这位托友并没有很清楚地且很正确地把握题目要求，这是一个致命的缺点，这样就使题干没有发挥它应有的指标性纲领的使用价值。就这道题的题干而言，它很明确地告诉大家答题顺序，具体分为三个步骤：1,Describe the problem and the two solutions; 2,explain what youthink the woman should do;3，why.因为托友没有按照题目建议的答题顺序作答，所以整体听起来没有层次。